Ode: There are two main types of odes: Horatian and Pindaric. Horatian odes typically have several stanzas that have the same meter and rhyming schemes, with each line rhyming with one other line in the stanza. A Pindaric ode contains three stanzas, the first two of the same form chosen by the author, and the last one being different.
The following ode was written by Mark Twain, who many of you probably know from prior English courses. He is also the author of "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer".
Ode to Stephen Dowling Bots
And did young Stephen sicken,
And did young Stephen die?
And did the sad hearts thicken,
And did the mourners cry?
No; such was not the fate of Young Stephen Dowling Bots;
Though sad hearts round him thickened,
'Twas not from sickness' shots.
No whooping-cough did rack his frame,
Nor measles drear, with spots;
Not these impaired the sacred name
Of Stephen Dowling Bots.
Despised love struck not with woe
That head of curly knots,
Nor stomach troubles laid him low,
Young Stephen Dowling Bots.
O no. Then list with tearful eye,
Whilst I his fate do tell.
His soul did from this cold world fly,
By falling down a well.
They got him out and emptied him;
Alas it was too late;
His spirit was gone for to sport aloft
In the realms of the good and great.
And did young Stephen die?
And did the sad hearts thicken,
And did the mourners cry?
No; such was not the fate of Young Stephen Dowling Bots;
Though sad hearts round him thickened,
'Twas not from sickness' shots.
No whooping-cough did rack his frame,
Nor measles drear, with spots;
Not these impaired the sacred name
Of Stephen Dowling Bots.
Despised love struck not with woe
That head of curly knots,
Nor stomach troubles laid him low,
Young Stephen Dowling Bots.
O no. Then list with tearful eye,
Whilst I his fate do tell.
His soul did from this cold world fly,
By falling down a well.
They got him out and emptied him;
Alas it was too late;
His spirit was gone for to sport aloft
In the realms of the good and great.
This next ode was written by Alexander Pope, a famous "dead white male poet" from the 18th century.
Ode on Solitude (analyze this one!)
Happy the man, whose wish and care
A few paternal acres bound,
Content to breathe his native air,
In his own ground.
Whose heards with milk, whose fields with bread,
Whose flocks supply him with attire,
Whose trees in summer yield him shade,
In winter fire.
Blest! who can unconcern'dly find
Hours, days, and years slide soft away,
In health of body, peace of mind,
Quiet by day,
Sound sleep by night; study and ease
Together mix'd; sweet recreation,
And innocence, which most does please,
With meditation.
Thus let me live, unseen, unknown;
Thus unlamented let me dye;
Steal from the world, and not a stone
Tell where I lye.
A few paternal acres bound,
Content to breathe his native air,
In his own ground.
Whose heards with milk, whose fields with bread,
Whose flocks supply him with attire,
Whose trees in summer yield him shade,
In winter fire.
Blest! who can unconcern'dly find
Hours, days, and years slide soft away,
In health of body, peace of mind,
Quiet by day,
Sound sleep by night; study and ease
Together mix'd; sweet recreation,
And innocence, which most does please,
With meditation.
Thus let me live, unseen, unknown;
Thus unlamented let me dye;
Steal from the world, and not a stone
Tell where I lye.
Immediately obvious to me is the calm and peaceful atmosphere that Pope creates within the poem. His diction totally and entirely immerses the reader in the relaxing life that the man lives. From the man’s “health of body” and “peace of mind,” to his “sound sleep” and “study and ease/ together mix’d”, the man is depicted by Pope to be in complete harmony.
While the man is completely self-sustained from the “heards with milk, “fields with bread,” and “flocks,” the man lives a life of privacy and isolation. It isn’t outright stated whether or not the isolation is by choice, though the poem seems to imply that this is likely the case. The “hours, days, and years slide soft away” despite his lack of companionship, indicating that he is not unhappy with his lifestyle choice. The consonance in the phrase, “slide soft away,” draws particular attention to the fact that time does not seem to have a hold on this man. Also, the assonance in the last stanza in the phrase, “Thus let me live, unseen, unknown;/ Thus unlamented let me dye,” again highlights the way the man in the poem lives in seclusion. So while he does live away from everybody else, he mentions he wants to die “unlamented.” He wishes for others to not be saddened by his passing when the time comes, and by extension to not be troubled by his lack of human contact.
The man portrayed in this poem by Pope truly lives a satisfied life, as exemplified by Pope’s use of diction.
I agree that this poem has a very peaceful tone. When first hearing the title, I assumed that the poem would be a boring and melancholy piece about the farmer being lonely. I soon realized that the poet means for solitude to be a blessing to this farmer. The farmer is "Content to breathe his native air" and live off his land, and to the reader, it has an appealing quality. The farmer seems to live this way out of choice, and even as he is dying, he does not wish to trouble others.
ReplyDeleteI also noticed the serene mood. I also noticed enjambent in the lines "who can unconcern'dly find/ Hours, days, and years slide soft away". It's an interesting juxtaposition of Madison's ode about being alone because this has a more positive outlook on the serenity of being by yourself.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jill that the title "Ode on Solitude" does seem rather dreary, but quickly proves misleading. The word "solitude" is interesting, because in the majority of poetry I have read, "solitude" generally has a negative connotation (living a lonely life without friends, family, love, etc.) and generally sets a solemn tone. This ode is particularly interesting, as it focuses on a different side of solitude. I think "peaceful" is a very good word to describe the solitude in this poem, as the man clearly doesn't seem lonely. He is at peace with his life alone, with the ability to drift through life as he pleases, without having to deal with oppression from others. The man seems very nature-oriented as well, as in the first two stanzas, it is discussed how happily he lives off the "few paternal acres" he owns. Nature seems to be his preferred form of contact/communication, as his natural surroundings provide him everything he requires to feel at peace. Perhaps this is why he prefers to "live unseen, unkown," for he doesn't really need anything or anyone else.
ReplyDeleteAfter I first read this, the last stanza seemed a little different than the rest of the poem. I didn't really see it as the man had a satisfied life, like Brendan said. Once I read it over a couple more times I saw it more. The whole tone of the ode seemed peaceful, but somewhat dark. I find this very similar to the poem Madison posted about solitude, as they are both setting a peaceful mood and they both look to nature for solitude. I feel as though this is just an ordinary man, who has seemed to live life without anyone really knowing it, but he knows that and I think he's okay with that. He seems happy that he is alone and left in solitude. It also makes me wonder why he has chosen to live a life of solitude, and if he really is happier dying with nobody noticing.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Maggie.. the last stanza somewhat changes the meaning of the rest of the poem. We begin to think that he is content with the secluded life he lives, which is why the serenity of the poem works. Pope uses words like "soft", "peace", and "quiet". Although I still believe that this man is content with the peaceful life he lives, it seems he wishes to share it with someone else, so he won't die "unseen" and "unknown." From all of the things described that makes him "happy", it also hints that there are parts of his life he is not happy with, since he never uses anything dramatic such as "great" or "amazing." This man possibly has a story as to why he is so secluded in his world and whether it's his choice. To Libby: Although this man seems like he is content with his surroundings, it is highly unlikely that this man enjoys being invisible to everyone else. I doubt it is something he set his sights on. While this life mildly works for him, I believe that he has dreams of a life where things happened differently.
ReplyDeleteUpon reading this poem, I am more inclined to agree with Libby. I would even go so far as to say that the message of this poem is "ignorance is bliss," a frequently seen motif (I have found) among poetry. However, in this case I believe ignorance should be interpreted more as carelessness, or unconcernedness. From the very beginning, Pope writes, "Happy the man, whose wish and care/ a few paternal acres bound" or, happy is the man who never has to leave the comfort of his home. His trees supply him "shade" and "fire" when he needs it, and sleeps "sound[ly]." In addition, words such as "unconcern'dly," "innocence," and "meditation" suggest that the farmer is perfectly serene and uncaring. He is in this state of tranquility because he is not bothered by normal everyday worries. I think the last stanza can be interpreted as satyrical, only because if this poem really is stressing the blissfulness of ignorance, then it would not make sense for the farmer to be saying "thus unlamented let me dye." At this point it could be the voice of Pope, mocking the solitary lifestyle of the unaffected farmer. Yes, perhaps he lives a happy life now, but when he dies the world will not know.
ReplyDeleteIt's a stretch, I know. But I wanted to see if I could make it work.
I agree with Sarah, that it could be the voice of Pope creating a mockery of the farmers lifestyle. The poem is quite simplistic in structure; predictable rhyme scheme, relatively simple and common language. Everything is predictable and shows almost the worthlessness of such a simple life. That being sad, this type of lifestyle obviously appeals greatly and is fulfilling enough for the farmer, who I think without a doubt has chosen his life of isolation. "And not a stone Tell where I lye." Obviously he doesn't want to be found, he is content with a life of isolation and loneliness.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Chelsea about the simplicity of the poem, with its rhyme scheme and diction. The isolation expressed in the ode, though it would be assumed that the subject would be depressed and upset, seems rather fulfilling. It is harmonious and peaceful as opposed to melancholy and morose. This poem reminded me of the expression dealing with "simpler times" or when people say "back in the day," because there seems to be such fullness and contentment in the farmer pertaining to the life he leads.
ReplyDeleteI thought this poem was peculiar because I was surprised a man could be happy with his mundane job as a farmer. The flow of the poem was very smooth as too was the meaning behind the words, “Hours, days, and years slide soft away,”. I felt that I was on a feather gliding gently toward the ground. Words like, Quiet, Happy, innocence, and meditation all have peaceful connotations. Event the poem started off with the word, Happy, stating that the man is content with his life. After reading the ”Ode on Solitude” I no longer felt that life as a farmer was boring and melancholy. The speaker is not using lofty language instead he uses vocabulary that a commoner would likely use. In the fourth stanza the line that stood out to me was “Quiet by day” and “Sound sleep by night” these two phrases juxtapose one another, thus creating an image of the repetitive nature of his life and the peacefulness that accompanies it. And Jennifer... Is it one ‘n’ or two.. Anyway I believe that he likes being invisible to the rest of the world because if he wanted to be seen I do not believe he would have described the life of a farmer. I do not think that one can be peaceful and also live a public life.. Those are opposites kiddo. In the final stanza the speaker recognizes that he is unknown but he chooses not to fight it.
ReplyDeleteThis whole poem reminded me of some of those package brownie mixes. Once you pour in the mix, the oil, the eggs, everything is separated. This poem is very fluid and smooth and so is like the brownie mix once it has been whisking for for a while. But even though the mix is smooth and the poem flows, the brownie mix is still dark (because its chocolate) just like the poem’s meaning...even though the poem flows well throughout and is peaceful, I have a hunch that farming wasn’t his initial dream job and he is just taking the easy-way-out enjoying the rest of his life.
I like this. Basically, he's saying that he's content when he's doing his work and that he doesn't mind being left by himself sometimes. It's not like he's saying that he hates company or anything, he's just saying that he likes his peace and quiet.
ReplyDeleteI disagree that the message is anything like "ignorance is bliss". I feel like it's more along the lines of "chill out, bro". He's saying that we'd all be happier if we took the time to be content by ourselves and enjoy solitude when it's given to us. It's not overly critical of anything to me either.
This is a pretty boss poem overall.